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"Shut up will you?!" you spat as you pushed Chibitalia, making him cry.
Seeing his Ita-chan crying, Severine a.k.a Holy Rome  tackled you on the ground.
"You'll pay for making Ita-chan cry" he angrly hissed.
You gave him a glare, then smirk.
"Tsk try me"
"why you" he raised his little hands in the air to pucnch you.
You closed your eyes and prepare for Holy Roman's fist.
"THAT'S ENOUGH" a voice roared.
You open your eyes and saw Mr. Austria holding Holy Rome's Hand.
He pulled Holy Roman away from you and you quickly stood up.
"Severine, __ what the heck happen? Why does Ita-chan crying?"
Severine pointed you. "She did it.. She make Ita-chan cry and I'm gonna teach her a lesson"
He said as he charged towards you but stopped again by Mr. Austria.
"I said that's enough!" he shouted and pick Chibitalia up.
"__, Severine, Follow me" he said with a stern in his voice.
Both of you followed Mr. Austria.

~Time Skip
You all enter to Mr. Austria's mansion.
"You three stay here for a while, I'm gonna get something upstairs" he said and look at Chibibalia's direction..
"Ita-chan, don't let __ and Severine argue ok?"
Chibitalia nodded.
"Good" he smile and went upstairs.
As Mr. Austria dissapears, Holy Roman rush towards Chibitalia and hugs her. (Yeah Holy Roman thought Chibitalia's a Girl.. Blame Ms. Hungary)
"Italia are you alright?"
"Un. I'm ok" Chibitalia said cheerfully.
You rolled your eyes.
You hated how he cares to Chibitalia.
His attention were always for Chibitalia..
Why he doesn't look a me..
Don't he see that I like him... you bitterly thought.
you didn't notice Chibitalia is already infront of you..
"__-chan are you--"
you pushed him one again.
"Don't come closer" you glared.
"Hey! stop pushing Ita-chan" Severine said as he pushed you..
Mr. Austria saw what happen and dashed.
"__, Severine stop arguing.." he said as he handcuffed the two of you.

"Ehhhhh? what is this Mr. Austria?" you whined
"That's your punishment" he said calmly.
"But why am I handcuffed with her?" Serverine groaned at the Austrian.
"Well I was just planning to only punished __, but I saw you pushed her.." he said and pick Chibitalia once again..
"Ita-chan and I will just go outside.. I hope when we come back both of you already get along or else I won't release you"
then they walk away.

Time skip~
hours passed and Mr.Austria and Chibitalia were still outside.
Severine sighed.
"Man, I wish I'm with Ita-chan" he glares at you "This is all your fault.. "
You glared him.
You had enough.
"Ita-chan, Ita-chan, always Ita-chan, Don't you see me Severine-kun.. I like you!!"
Serverine gasp at your sudden outburst.
"Yo-you like me?" he asked, blushing.
"Yeah so? You don't care anyway right because you like Ita----"
you were cut off bye Severine, kissing your cheeks.
"I like you too"
"But I thought you like italia"
"I like Italia as my little sister" he grinned

Extended Ending:
"But Severine-kun.. Italia's a boy" you giggle
"Oh I --- wait what???!!"

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TheLazerGalaxy Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Fusososososo :iconyayspainplz: :iconyayhreplz:
pinkpony28 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer

I got that vibe from this, I don't know why.
Taco-nyan-cat Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015
Italyslostspirit Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Lol. I imagined that reader actually was a boy UwU. * happy *
applewhite210 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Student Artist
xXNightFullOfStarsXx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2015  Professional Interface Designer
Kspowell2002 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Student Filmographer

So cute
RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Snickers You Don't See A Child Boy Can Be A Girl / A Child Girl Can Be A Boy 
Frenchfrieswithtoast Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Hobbyist
Hahah! I love the ending! I knew that was gonna happen one day~! 
KiddoKunsGirl Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2014
:3 love this!!
Abigailwolfy Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dat ending doe.
elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
XD dat extended ending!!! XD
Smallfrie15 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*snaps* oh snap sorry I let the cat out Miss Hungry's bag my bad... u mad dude
PinkieTheAnimePerson Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Gemiri Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Seems like in the end what the reader is actually saying is "NOTICE ME SENPAI!" XD

Btw: My name is Italia and whenever I read these ChibitaliaxHRE or GerIta fanfic it's weird xD
Smallfrie15 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*read bottem note* it should be fantastic if u ship it... that must also make Ita-chan x read stuff weird too
Gemiri Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It is .-.
Smallfrie15 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
its like self on self... I like ur profile pic by the way really cool
Gemiri Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Self on self xD and thank you :)
Smallfrie15 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I couldn't do me I'm to shy we would get nowhere
Faustita Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
lol nice of you to know Holy roman XD
Femdenmark92 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014
HRE looks like chibi Germany a little bit lol
And now he knows that chibitalia isn't a girl lol XD
Fallinghikari Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Germany once was HRE.
At least that's my head cannon. (And what actual history says.)
Femdenmark92 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014
I FrUk-in knew it XD
lol FrUk
France: ohonhonhon ;)
England: •face palms•
Fallinghikari Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Run England, run.
lexaline-chan Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist
That ending xD
Faustita Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
Price less hahaha XD
xTMNTx Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
xTMNTx Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
I got kissed by HRE, that's so sweet :iconitssofluffyplz:
AllenSt0n3123 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Interface Designer
:icongermanyblushingplz: test run
AllenSt0n3123 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Interface Designer
Vocaloid-Anime-FL Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
dat extended ending...LOL
LucasandLoba Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Student Filmographer
Das cute...
grey-eyes-kitty-cat Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X'D dear gosh,I wish.....*sighs and hide into an emo corner....* DON'T JUDGE I'M CRYING RIGHT NOWEmoticon - TT.TT Emoticon - TT.TT Emoticon - TT.TT 
Empress-Mikuni Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I am jealous a lot...... 
shadowXtikalfan Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013
Hahha I would be jelous too lol
ilovenico123 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
hahahahahahahaha. Poor HR it was about time that he knew. XJ I love thisXD
1StarTwinkle Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013
*reads the extended ending* Hello yeah~! *fist pumps* That's what I would've done! XD I'd bring a camera too to take a pic of his face.
Triforcefangirl Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that was so cute! :iconblushplz:
AwesomeHellee9 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist
BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
This is so cute.~

Just a tip though maybe space them out and check your spelling. :3 And a little more detail or descriptions would be good.

And if possible submit this as a deviation not a journal. ^^
ohhunlaine Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Writer
ah ok ok ^^ Thanks for the advice
BoxOfAwesomeness Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013
You're welcome. ^^
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